I've been giving my presentation a great deal of thought as I knew it wasn't right. It was my fault as I hadn't read the brief properly and only when I checked it again, I realised I had headed in the wrong direction. I aimed for history of photography, when I should have researched history of portrait photography.
I had to review and change the whole xxxx so redid the beginning but it still contained areas on technology instead of portrait photography. I've decided to revamp the mid section and concentrate more on photographers rather than on equipment although I do think the developments in technology do influence portrait styles.
